Tenebris: Arthor run...he'll kill you, you and karri need to run.
Raxis: the perfect vessels are in my hands!
Tenebris: Arthor and karri vessels. no, I wont let them get hurt. I have to save them.
Raxis: All I needed was you to awaken your powers, so thank you.
Tenebris: why am I so cold, my body wont move. do something. I have to....
Karri: It's all my fault. . . I'm so sorry. . . Tenebris.
(Tenebris opens his eyes and he is in a dark room lit by a candle on the bedside table. he looks around and karri asleep laying over the bed)
Tenebris: (thinking) karri? (He puts his hand out and sees that there's new seals on his arm. he looks over and his rings are on the side table, all black and cracked.)
Tenebris: where am I?
Karri: (opens his eyes and sits up and sees tenebris) Tenebris...?
Tenebris: what's going..(he gets stopped by karri giving him a hug. he gives him a hug back hesitantly)
Karri: Your awake!
Arthor: (pushes the door open and walks in with his arm in a sling and he's holding a couple blankets in his other hand) If you wont leave tenebris side the here are some...(sees tenebris and drops the blankets) Tenebris. (he walks over hesitantly and hugs tenebris too)
Arthor: thank you.
Tenebris: for what?
Arthor: For fighting for us.
Tenebris: (he smiles) I told you I keep my promises.
Karri: I thought we lost you! (he's sobbing)
(it cuts to morning and everyone is standing in the room with tenebris in bed. Arthor sitting in a chair with his arm in a sling next to karri sitting right next to tenebris, machi standing with his side all bandaged up, Keira and Sam standing next to the door and lykoi sitting on the other side of the bed with ulfer laying next to him.)
Keira: So what do you remember?
Tenebris: I remember confronting Raxis and a fight ensuing. after that it all goes fuzzy, until I woke up here.
Arthor: so you don't remember being stabbed or anything?
Tenebris: no. I'm assuming we won though right, we stopped the war? I mean I couldn't have been out that long, are the other legions here yet?
Keira: tenebris that was almost two weeks ago.
Tenebris: What!? what happened to Egran?
Keira: when we saw the fight going on at the castle we hurried to the scene. when Rekinn and I arrived we found you laying in a crater where the castle had been. (a flashback happens and it shows Keira and Rekinn running in and finding Tenebris on the ground with Raxis nowhere to be seen. )
Sam: when the other legions arrived we had you, arthor, and machi taken to a medical center in Sedanss. ( it shows the legionaries from the docks arresting villagers, legionaries including Leon and lower level Kongur members. they are also helping injured people. The gang walk off a ship in Sedanss with legionaries carrying tenebris on a stretcher, and helping machi. karri's helping arthor guards try to help but arthor angrily waves them off.)
Keira: (flashback ends) as of now, Rekinn is acting as the leading authority while they choose a replacement for Sirius. Many villages are still hostile towards outsiders, I don't believe the war will be truly over any time soon.
Tenebris: What about Raxis?
Sam: No sign of him, or any of the higher ups.
Machi: but when he does show up we'll be there to put a stop to em.
Keira: now that the higher ups have been identified we have every legion on the lookout.
Tenebris: (looks at his arm)
Keira: (notices him looking at his arm) alright everyone out, I need to talk to tenebris...alone.
(everyone leaves and Keira locks the door behind them)
Tenebris: what are you doing?
Keira: making sure we're not interrupted, I don't want to be starting rumors, especially if they aren't true. (she pulls a seat next to his bed and sits down) Arthor and karri said they saw you get stabbed through the chest by Raxis. yet there is not so much as a scratch on you. So what really happened tenebris?
Tenebris: (he goes silent for a minute and tries to remember) I..I don't know. I told you as much as I can remember.
Keira: Not egran, back then? what is that dark energy (she nods to the rings)
Tenebris: I cant tell you.
Keira: Why not!?
Tenebris: Because I don't know.
Keira: Don't lie to me! You think I don't remember what's under those seals. Before we got to the castle there was an energy it was unnatural and dark. I wished I could say that it was the first time I felt it but I cant. Its the same energy that demon had back then. I wanted to believe that energy belonged to someone else in egran, but I could feel the same sadness in it, that I felt at trinity.
Tenebris: (he looks at his hand and his ring) I really wished I could tell you, but I honestly don't remember.
Keira: Alejandro reported something similar happening to Magnus. the dark energy like a flood. before he took out 3 royal knights like it was nothing. This energy is dangerous tenebris...so please tell me, what this Chaos is?
Tenebris: I don't know what you want from me, but I already told you that I don't know. Trust me If I could get rid of it I would, but I cant and I have to live with knowing I made a mistake that I cant even remember. a mistake that cost me everything is that the answer you wanted! (shocked at himself actually getting angry and seeing Keira with tears in her eyes )
Keira: I was so happy when I found out you were still alive... (she gets up and walks over to the door and opens it.) But I'm starting to think the Tenebris I knew died a long time ago. (she walks out)
Tenebris: (looks at his destroyed rings on the table) maybe he did.
(cut to a fortress with huge walls stretching out on either side. it zooms in on 2 legionaries on top of the walls)
Legionary: hear the news?
Legionary 2: Yeah, seems that the wars over before it begun.
Legionary : man, and we didn't even get any action, we had to stay here and protect this stupid territory.
Legionary 2: Right? all those legionaries in Eldur, they get everything while were here doing nothing. if we were there we would've show everyone what us guardian legionaries can do.
Legionary : that's right, You and me buddy were going to become royal knights and finally get the respect we deserve.
Legionary 2: yeah! you hear somthin?
Legionary: yeah sounds like a fights braking out again. (they start walking to the nearest tower and the lights go dim) what the heck? what's going on why are the lights out acrost the walls? (he looks back and the other legionary is gone) hey where'd you go!? (The assassin that fought the gang appears behind the legionary and covers his mouth as he stabs him in the back and throws him off the wall. it cuts to an Egranian transport vehicle that dries at the gate and it opens as the transport goes through it keeps going and stops and Valka, Ehud, and Barron all step out. The two other higher ups drop down on either side of the vehicle)
Assassin : the area is secure.
Assassin 2: all legionaries are taken care of.
Valka: good work, Nyx and Nox. (Barron and Ehud open the back of the transport and grab Raxis body and Valka holds out her arms and takes Raxis)
Ehud: Do you really think this is a good idea, what if it doesn't work?
Valka: This will work! it has to. (she takes him and starts walking out and it shows a massive wall of multi colored fire) Return to me my love. (she walks up to the fire and holds Raxis body out into the flames and the fire consumes both her and Raxis and she screams in pain then it goes silent)
Nyx: are they gone?
Nox: I cant see anything its too bright.
Ehud: they're gone. lets get out of here.
(they all turn back to walk towards the transport and Barron is left standing looking at the fire. he turns back when the chaos blade flies out of the windshield of the transport and flies past everyone and flies into the wall as a hand sticks out and catches it. )
Ehud: what is that!?
(Out of the fire walks a towering figure with black energy covering its body. small horns jut out of the top of its head making a crown, its eyes fully black with red irises. the a coat of black energy flowing down to the ground and the chaos blade in its clawed hand. next to it walks a woman covered in the black energy with two small horns coming out of her forehead and black scales cover her arms and legs)
(Barron kneels and the others kneel after him)
Barron: welcome back my king.
(it ends on a shot of Raxis standing above the kneeling Kongur and Valka next to him)
CHAPTER 90 LIFE AFTER DEATH
(the chapter opens with Tenebris in a hospital room, he' sitting on the end of the bed holding the broken rings)
Tenebris: why cant I hear you. (his eyes light up light blue but the rings don't glow. his eyes stop) where did you go?
(the door opens and karri barges in)
Karri: GOOD MORNING TENEBRIS!
Tenebris: (doesn't even acknowledge him and continues staring at his rings)
Karri: hey...are you okay?
Tenebris: huh..yeah..yeah im fine. whats up?
Karri: I was told to let you know there's some guy that came to see you.
(Rekinn walks in to the room behind karri)
Tenebris: Rekinn? what are you doing here, aren't you supposed to be leading Egran while they search for a replacement?
Rekinn: I am, but I was informed that you had woken up and I had to come here and thank you myself.
Tenebris: oh. thank you, but that's not necessary. We had our own reasons for helping too, so we would've done it anyway
Rekinn: No, I was reckless in my judgement. I had not realized truly how dire the situation was. I guess I was blindsided by the loss of my friend. I should have done more. It's my responsibility as Egrans immortal Knight to do what is best for the kingdom, but I put myself above others.
Tenebris: no, you made the right decision. you said it Yourself, your duty is to your people, and because of your decision they have a leader they can trust. you did what you had to.
Rekinn: If that is truly what you believe then I will not push the matter any further. but at least let me offer you a gift as a thanks on my behalf and Egrans.
Tenebris: I wont say no to gifts.
Rekinn: very well then. When your party is healthy, a transport will take you tracks. you can go to Baeinn, where we have temporarily set up headquarters while we rebuild Eldur. I will meet you there
Tenebris: Thank you very much (he puts his arm acrost his chest and bows) (Rekinn leaves the room)
Karri: I like gifts.
(2 days go by and tenebris wakes up and gets dressed)
(it cuts to Tenebris and walking to the lobby of the hospital where karri, Sam, Machi, lykoi, ulfer and Arthor are sitting)
Machi: look whose finally awake.
Tenebris: where's Keira?
Sam: she left yesterday for the Sedanss capital building, she said she was reporting back to Chelliah.
Lykoi: she did not seem happy.
Tenebris: yeah, unfortunately that might be my fault.
Machi: what'd you do?
Tenebris: nothing. but I think that was the problem.
Karri: what's that supposed to mean?
Tenebris: she asked me about the battle in Eldur, but I couldn't give her any answers. I don't think she believed me.
Arthor: she's just mad she missed out on taking Raxis down.
Sam: Keira's not like that.
Arthor: that's all you legionaries care about, fame and power. it's clear she's angry at tenebris for stealing the spotlight from her.
Sam: You know that's not true!
Arthor: then what else could it be!
Tenebris: Alright! calm down. we've all been under a lot of stress recently, I get it. but the war is over now, so we can relax. and I think I know just the thing to help us do that.
(it cuts to the gang taking a transport through town)
Machi: (barely fitting in the back of the truck) So uh..where we going, and how soon are we going to get there?
Tenebris: Rekinn said to meet him in Baeinn. so we'll take the tracks there soon.
Machi: that's great.
Sam: did he tell you what the gift was?
Tenebris: no. (notices arthor kinda sad) you alright?
Arthor: yeah.
Machi: you look sad.
Arthor: sad, why would I be sad, The Kongur have disappeared and we got karri back.... its just that...I cant stop thinking about what he said.
Machi: what who said?
Karri: Raxis. He said the reason he took me and karri in was to train us to be sacrifices.
Machi, Sam, and lykoi: Sacrifices!?
Tenebris: sacrifices for what?
Arthor: it was something about Jericho and releasing someone.
Karri: Esforis.
Sam: Jericho is a seal put in place by the first immortals, it's said to separate the human and spirit realms. but what do you guys have to do with the seal?
Tenebris: the prophecy of the oncoming storm said that six warriors would fight against the release of Esforis.
Sam: if that's true and we count everyone who fought in the castle that would be six. Tenebris, Arthor, Karri, Machi, Lykoi, and me.
Machi: so does that mean we stopped the prophecy?
Tenebris: I don't think we'll ever know for sure. (the whole transport goes silent) one thing is for sure though. If we stopped Raxis once, we can do it again.
The gang: yeah! (tenebris looks down at his broken rings)
(the transport stops at the tracks and the gang go to get on the train and Sam stops)
Karri: aren't you coming with us?
Sam: I need to go find Keira. I was to stay with you until you were healthy. plus from the sounds of it she's angry enough as it is, if I left with you guys I think she might hurt you worse than Raxis.
Tenebris: alright. well we'll be back soon.
Sam: Bye! (she waves as the door closes and the train starts moving)
(it cuts to the back of a man chopping firewood)
Gregor: (walks into frame) Took a while to find you.
(the man stops and looks over his shoulder and his one eye glows light blue)
Gregor: The king of Egran has a mission for ya.
CHAPTER 91 RECOVERY
(the chapter opens with the gang walking off the tracks into an Baeinn a city built around a volcano)
(everyone walks off the train with machi walking off last and he barely fits under the train door)
Machi: ight, im never raiding on these tracks again (as he stretches out and bones pop)
Tenebris: unfortunately it's the fastest way to get around.
Machi: yeah yeah, this gift better be worth the trip.
Karri: I liked the trip quite a lot.
Machi: thats cuse you got to play with the dog the whole time.
Lykoi: Ulfer enjoyed the trip too.
Arthor: did Rekinn tell you where we're supposed to go?
Tenebris: no, actually he just said he would be here.
Machi: maybe its like a surprise party or somthn.
Tenebris: Something tells me Rekinn isn't one for surprise parties, come to think of it I don't see any legionaries around here.
Arthor: yeah, your right. usually theirs at lest a few legionaries posted by the tracks,
Tenebris: they must've set up camp around here lets go. (they start walking through town and they ask a few people and eventually make it to the legionary building and walk in)
Egranian legionary: what business do you have here?
Tenebris: we're looking for the immortal knight.
Egranian legionary: The immortal, I'm sorry he is very busy right now, citizen matters will have to wait.
Machi: I don't think you know who your talking to, we're the guys who took that evil guy you made king.
Egranian legionary: so that was you guys...you were the ones who destroyed our capital city and endangered civilians, some of which are still in medical care.
Machi: uhhh, well uhh....
Legionary captain: tenebris and company, welcome. I'll take it from here. (the soldier walks off angrily)
Legionary captain: Rekinn told me all about you, so let me thank you for your service.
Tenebris: that's not necessary, stopping the war is an honor enough.
Legionary captain: Rekinn is currently in a meeting so I will show you to a waiting room.
(the gang start following him into a legionary building)
Legionary captain: I bit of advice, I would keep your identities as secret as possible. many people still harbor some ill will towards the outsiders that invaded the capital. the public still thinks that Solomon was some kind of savior.
Tenebris: I take it your perspective is different?
Legionary captain: very. I saw firsthand what Solomon and magnus did. I watched as they killed our people, our brothers...and I knew if I did anything against it, that I would end up just like them.
Arthor: legionaries.
Tenebris: (looks at him angrily)
Arthor: what?
Lykoi: My people have saying, " a pack is made of many wolves, but change takes only one. "
you can be the change now.
Legionary captain: hm. by the spirit bond by your side I assume you are of the Frosinn tribe?
Lykoi: yes.
Legionary: what is someone from the Frosinn tribe doing here?
Lykoi: I come to end the fighting. many tribesmen have lost to Egran and its bad water.
Legionary captain: You seem young to be an advocate for your people?
Lykoi: I come for myself. I want the best for my people.
Legionary captain: Me too kid. (they walk to a waiting room) anyway, I will let Rekinn know your here, for now make yourselves comfortable.
Tenebris and Karri: thank you. (they sit down)
Tenebris: Is that really the reason you aren't going back lykoi?
Lykoi: yes. I made promise to myself and my people. I have avenged my brothers, but fighting not stopped yet.
Machi: what did you mean by bad water?
Lykoi: Egran's bad water causes less fish. My brothers go farther for fish, and get attacked.
Arthor: so those people in the ice, they weren't warriors defending the tribe?
Lykoi: no, they are fishermen.
Machi: brutal.
Tenebris: I'm sure Rekinn or whoever is going to lead Egran will hear you out.
Lykoi: I hope so.
(a little while later Rekinn walks into the room)
Rekinn: sorry to keep you waiting, I'm glad to see your well enough for the journey.
Tenebris: glad to be well enough for the journey. (gives him a handshake)
Rekinn: it will not be easy for Egran to recover but I believe a good starting place is settling its debts. And Egran has no greater debt than to those who saved it. I have prepared an escort to Voltarrok for you and your party.
Machi: Voltarrok? like the world forge Voltarrok?
Rekinn: Your familiar?
Machi: who isn't? Voltarrok is said to be where Malmite was discovered. its the most technologically advanced city in the world. but why are we going all the way out to Voltarrok?
Rekinn: l want to offer malmite weapons forged by the master blacksmith himself.
Tenebris: (shocked)
Machi: that's so sick!
Arthor and karri: lets go!
Rekinn: I realize its not much but It is the greatest resource we have.
Tenebris: No, no that's more than enough really. thank you.
Rekinn: are you sure.
Tenebris: It would be our honor to accept these gifts.
Rekinn: Your escort is outside. they will take you to the tracks.
Machi: not again!
(it shows them walking outside and a truck waits for them with legionaries standing at attention. The gang hop in and tenebris helps arthor up)
Rekinn: tenebris before you leave. (he nods. tenebris walks over and they step away from the truck. )
Tenebris: really this is more than I ever expected.
Rekinn: No, its not about that. we received word earlier today that an entire stronghold was found dead near Jericho.
Tenebris: what?
Rekinn: not only that but Demion of the 2nd was taken during the invasion of the border of Sedanss.
Tenebris: the 2nd? by who?
Rekinn: multiple sources including the 6th immortal say that it was a legionary from Egran who possessed a dark energy.
Tenebris: (shocked)
Rekinn: Keira told me about the prophecy of the oncoming storm. I fear that this war might have just been the begging.
Tenebris: is this why your sending us to Voltarrok?
Rekinn: yes. I want to be prepared next time. so something like this never happens again.
Tenebris: Thank you for telling me. (he starts walking back to the transport and gets in. as the truck starts moving he looks back and Rekinn salutes him. )
CHAPTER 92 EMBERS
(the gang role up to the tracks and hop out and start walking. )
Karri: Are you okay?
Tenebris: yeah
Arthor: you don't look okay
Tenebris: I'm fine. just...tired.
Machi: I feel that. it's been forever since I've had a bed that actually fits me.
Karri: I have a feeling it's still going to be a while.
Machi: (sad) yeah.
(they board the train and they sit down in the benches)
Machi: so how far is Voltarrok?
Tenebris: the station said almost 2 days.
Machi: MAAAN!
(the doors close and the train starts moving/ it cuts to a panel of Arthor looking out the window and seeing the mountains their going through. then it cuts to the gang getting food and eating. another cut to it being dark and the lights on the train come on) (Machi, and lykoi are sleeping and karri is asleep hugging ulfer)
Tenebris: (looking at his broken rings in his hand)
Arthor: So what are we going to do now?
Tenebris: ( looks over and Arthors looking out the window. ) what do you mean?
Arthor: We stopped the war, and we found karri...now what?
Tenebris: ...I don't know.
Arthor: . . . Their still out there aren't they?
Tenebris: .....Rekinn told me a fortress on the edge of Egran's kingdom was attacked. everyone was killed. they had reports of the dark energy.
Arthor: I knew it. I knew something was wrong.
Tenebris: Arthor it's not your job to deal with them.
Arthor: Isn't it? Tenebris their after me and karri. We cant just sit back and do nothing while you fight our battles for us.
Tenebris: So what do you want me to do? you almost died the last time you fought Raxis
Arthor: well you did....and I'm not going to let that happen again. (his eyes glow blue)
Tenebris: Arthor look at me. (arthor looks over) look, I'm still here. I'm alive. And I don't plan on leaving anytime soon.
Arthor: people don't plan on dying tenebris. (he looks back out the window) doesn't change the fact that they do.
Tenebris: (looks down at his rings) I know that...Trust me. (he looks out the window too. Arthor side eyes him holding his rings and looking out the window.)
(it cuts to Keira leaning on a bridge watching the fish. Sam walks up)
Sam: there you are. I've been looking for you everywhere.
Keira: Oh...hey...
Sam: what's up?
Keira: it's nothing.
Sam: is it about tenebris?
Keira: ....yeah...
Sam: (sits on the ledge)
Keira: (sits on the ledge too) I had started to think that there was no one else like me....I've seen so much...and I've lost even more. So when tenebris appeared I thought I had finally found someone just like me. but I was wrong.
Sam: I mean, he might not remember much but he's still tenebris isn't he?
Keira: ....not the one I knew. Something happened to him after he left my village...something to do with that dark energy. its like he's forgotten who he was.
Sam: maybe you just remember him differently?
Keira: ....Maybe your right...where are they anyway?
Sam: they went to Baeinn to meet Rekinn.
Keira: What!?!
(it cuts back to tenebris and gang as they get off the train in the morning. they arrive in a town built around a massive volcano. the whole city looks like one massive factory, the streetlights all glow a fiery red and people driving small vehicles around. the gang walk down the street and see many people forging weapons and armor. other people working on some kind of machines or buildings. )
Karri: this place is incredible!
Lykoi: Incredible hot...(Lykoi's sweating and ulfer panting heavily)
Tenebris: we should probably find this master blacksmith quickly.
(they ask around and some people point them in the direction and they come up to a small building at the base of the volcano. )
Machi: is this really the master blacksmiths forge?
Karri: how would we know?
Tenebris: only one way to find out. (he walks up to the door and knocks on it.)
(muffled in the distance)
Voice: Go away, I gave you what you wanted now leave. (they hear clanking from inside) agh, fracken...hughhh.
Tenebris: (knocks on the door again)
Voice: (hears a massive clanking again and metal falling over) Son of a...fine. (he opens the door and you see a fairly tall younger man with shorter brown hair and goggles around his neck.) who are you and what do you want?
Tenebris: We are here to see the master blacksmith for weapons....
Blacksmith: Like I told your friends, I'm not going to make any more weapons to use in you stupid war, I don't care if the king sent for em or not got it?
Tenebris: No, no the wars over.
Blacksmith: what? this is the first I'm hearing of this?
Machi: The war ended over a week ago.
Blacksmith: really? I'm surprised Solomon would surrender that fast, didn't seem like the peaceful type. but I guess you shouldn't judge a book by what it's done to a whole kingdom.
Arthor: he didn't surrender. we stopped him.
Blacksmith: keep tellin yourself that kid. now if you excuse me, I have work to do. (starts to close the door)
Tenebris: (tenebris stops the door ) Rekinn sent us.
Blacksmith: Rekinn? what's that hothead got to do with me?
Tenebris: Rekinn: he's the current leader of Egran after Solomon went missing.
Blacksmith: (looks at tenebris) you look familiar, were you a royal knight or somthin?
Tenebris: not quite.
Blacksmith: whatcha mean by that?
Tenebris: look Rekinn sent us to have you make weapons for us as a gift for stopping the war.
Blacksmith: (looks at everyone with bandages on and arthor with his arm in a sling) you weren't joking were ya?
Arthor: it's what I said! (jumps at the blacksmith but karri holds him back)
Blacksmith: hmm, aight lets get you some metal then....heroes (he opens the door and the gang walk in and he shuts the door behind them)
CHAPTER 94 PEACE OF MIND
Blacksmith: welcome to the Sindri Forge (the chapter opens as the gang walk into the forge and karri and machi are amazed by the inventions and weapons all over the place. Arthor and tenebris just follow the blacksmith)
Blacksmith: this is where all the royal knights get their equipment made by yours truly. Aye! don't touch that!
Karri: Sorry.
(they walk under a doorway with the symbol of fire above it. and they come to a massive room with fire blazing in the braziers and furnaces)
Lykoi: you have water?
Blacksmith: yeah its over there (lykoi runs over and dunks his head into a pool of water, and both lykoi and ulfer start drinking the water but they spit it out) That's the slack tub, the waters next to it. (they look over and they see a spicket) So what are you looking to get uhh, what was your name?
Tenebris: Tenebris.
Blacksmith: (his eyes go wide) Sorry what was your name?
Tenebris: Tenebris, should I know you?
Blacksmith: No...no, sorry, my grandfather told me about a man named tenebris....anyway, Makros. If Rekinn sent you, then you must be in the market for some malmite yeah?
Tenebris: well, I don't need a weapon but these guys do.
Makros: (starts firing up the forge and grabbing tools) you kids A.R.K.s pr somthin?
Arthor: not a chance. Karri: kinda? Machi: who do you think your talking to?
Makros: ookay I'll take that as a no. you atlest know how to use orku though right?
all of em: yeah.
Makros: alright then, lets get things start. (he puts his goggles on) think fast (he throws over a chunk of a rock to karri who catches it)
Makros: lets see what im working with. put some of you energy into that.
Karri: (his eyes glow light blue and the rock starts glowing and small sparks of lightning come off it. (makros grabs it) thanks. ( his eyes light up red and the rock starts floating in front of him and splits into many different pieces. He holds out his hands and a couple other rocks from a bin fly up and he constructs them into a cast and places it on a large machine. he pulls a leaver and molten metal pours out into the cast. he puts another metal cover on top and grabs it with his gauntlets and dunks it into the water. then puts it on a anvil and and cracks the case open and starts hammering away. then dipping into the water. everyone looking in awe as he repeats the process several times. . then he puts his hand out and a flame burst out of his gauntlet like a blowtorch and he starts making the cuts for it and repeats the process of heating and cooling. it forms into a smaller dagger and chains that he hammers several more times and grinds it to perfection. he pulls his goggles up)
Makros: Lightning fast strikes, versatile at close range and long range. I call them chain lightning. get it? (he hands it to karri. who takes them and wraps the chains around his arm. )
Makros: Try it out. (he takes him over to a training zone with dummies and targets. Karri slashes a couple of times and spins the chains around as his eyes light up but he trips and gets tangled in the chains)
(machi and Arthor laugh)
Makros: it will take some training but they'll prove you good.
Karri: (still wrapped up in the chains) thanks!
Makros: next up. ( it has a montage of Makros making everyone's weapons and handing them out)
(he hands machi duel axes)
Makros: Unstoppable and excels in close range. I call these the rage rippers (his eyes glow and he slices a dummy in half. )
Machi: Ohhoho yeah.
(another montage. he wraps the handle of a pistol like a katana and hands it to lykoi)
Makros: Small enough to carry and use one handed, but still powerful at range. perfect for someone who helps from a distance. I call it the Wolf's claw. just point and pull back.
(lykoi holds it out in front of him and his eyes light up and he shoots a bullet out and completely misses the target. )
(another montage)
Karri: I bet yours is gonna be awesome, like a scythe or sword or something.
Arthor: I cant wait.
(makros finishes up and wires 4 metal strands and hands Arthor a sword with metal violin strings attached to one side and metal bow. )
Makros: Control the tempo of the battle, and protect others with melodic power. I call it the Violencia.
Arthor: (Grabs it with his good hand) is this some kind of joke?
Makros: You think my work is a joke?
Arthor: what am I supposed to do with this? play a song for my enemies?
Makros: well, yeah. I thought that was obvious?
Arthor: why couldn't I get a sick sword or axe or something and I get an instrument?
Makros: My gift allows me to create objects based on a persons orku. You made the decision not me.
Arthor: what, there's no way I would ever use this, just give me a sword or dagger or something.
Tenebris: Arthor, this is a gift, take it.
Arthor: (looks angrily at tenebris, then back at makros whose smiling smugly) thanks.
Makros: that should be it for the weapons. it will take time to find their true strength. the more orku and training you put into these weapons the more they will become extensions of yourself. they might even change in appearance.
Tenebris: Thank you makros, for everything. (he puts out his hand)
Makros: don't mention it....actually do mention it. Rekinn owes me for this. I aint just giving out this pure of Malmite to anyone.
Tenebris: you got it. (they shake hands. they start walking out of the forge)
(makros walks over to his desk and he sits down and opens a drawer and pulls out a picture of his grandfather with a young man with shorter white hair and teal eyes. holding a sword with what looks like the hands of a clock for the hilt.)
Makros: that cant be him. can it?
(the last shot is the gang looking at their new weapons on the train. )
I really like the mysterious tone around Tenebris and the way his past slowly unfolds it makes the world feel bigger and more intriguing. I’m especially curious about the consequences he mentioned on his arm; do you plan to reveal what happened to him gradually as the story progresses?
I really like the mysterious tone around Tenebris and the way his past slowly unfolds it makes the world feel bigger and more intriguing. I’m especially curious about the consequences he mentioned on his arm; do you plan to reveal what happened to him gradually as the story progresses?